We slumber heavy in the night
so long as hills are bare and white,
and what is real, is pressing. What
can you do but answer. What can
you do but take my jaw in hand
and answer. And what can I, but
know you while night visions press us, hot
in our down blanket. What cannot
be spoken we will speak with night
still resting on us €”your air
on me, and my warm shoulder bare
to you €”real, real as day is light
until we wake in morning’s cold,
when mountains, rimming in the gold
of cresting sun, can no more be
deferred. What can we do but rise.
That I could stop you with my gaze
as you work your task of leaving me.
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Sarah Dunster is wife to one, mother to seven, and an author of fiction and poetry. Her poems have appeared on Wilderness Interface Zone as well as in Victorian Violet Press, Segullah Magazine, Dialogue: Journal of Mormon Thought, and Sunstone Magazine. Her novel Lightning Tree was released by Cedar fort in April of 2012. When she is not writing, Sarah can often be found cleaning, cooking vegetarian meals, holding small people in her lap, or taking long, risky walks after dark, especially in thunderstorms.
Beautiful. I think you have a gift for erotic poetry that is delightfully sensual. Also, I think the rhyme works wonderfully here.
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Thank you. I’m blushing a little that you’d say erotic. But thank you 🙂
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Oh, I didn’t mean to make you blush. Maybe I’m just reading it and inflecting words through erotic-colored glasses? Blame the reader!
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It is a bit sexy, will admit.
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I admire your refusal to use question marks.
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question marks are of the devil.
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I have to disagree. Though what you are posing here are not questions, really, but sighing resignations, so it works.
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( I also disagree… questioning is only of the devil in certain situations. Just needed a flippant remark to respond to the flippancy above 🙂
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I did not mean to be flippant.
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OK. This interface is a funny one sometimes. Just so you know… I was being playful with what I perceived to be flippancy… no offense taken at all. I appreciate you reading, and commenting upon, my poem.
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Sarah – understood. I love your work. Thank you for sharing it.
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